My student Jeongjae wrote this as a speech about a trip to an imaginary place. I like it. He's an interesting student. His writing is unedited, below - I have corrected nothing. Not perfect, of course, but I think for a 6th grader he does pretty well.
I went to an opposite world. It looked complicated, funny and horrible, because everything in the world was opposite to Earth.
I will introduce my experience in an opposite world. First, it was funny. A mouse was giving pain to a cat like Tom& Jerry and penguin was walking in a desert and flying through the air. Second, it was good for students. The students were teaching teachers and giving a lot of homework.
teachers were crying because of a lot of homework, but every teachers studied hard. Third, it was good for kids. Every animation chracter and game chracter was living with people and the animals were walking like people. The greatest thing is the president was Pororo, every citizen liked the president. Finally, it was good for everyone. All things were free and they didn't have war, so an opposite world's citizen liked to live in this world.
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