The surreptitious movements made
by mice in windblown leaves
reveal the clockwork of the world
to passing birds, like thieves.
- a quatrain in ballad meter.
[daily log: walking, 1.5km]
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I really like this quatrain! The sound of the words, and the thoughts behind them are both compelling and wonderful. Sorry my prose is so un-poetic, however!
Posted by: Bob Gehrenbeck | 2017.04.09 at 20:48